Posted in Our Adventures, Writing & Penmanship

Super Sentences

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I was very impressed with these two sentences that Delightful, 10, wrote as part of her Christian Light Grade 5 Reading course.  The assignment was to use personification:

The ocean ate hungrily at the beach, devouring all the sand.

and

The volcano belched and heaved up great clouds of sulfur and acid.

Now, if only I could get her to consistently produce this level of quality writing!

 

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